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« Reply #30 on: March 02, 2010, 05:09:11 PM »

ok it will be up tonight
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« Reply #31 on: March 13, 2010, 05:06:37 PM »

Chapter 4

"I know your there i can sense you"said the demon.The man walked over to the deamon and pulled the blindfold off the demon."how come my powers arent working on you" asked the demon. "See these glasses covering our eyes, our scientists discovered them when one of your own kind switched sides he showed them how your powers work."said the man. "why is it you are trying to destory this village, there is nothing here" asked the priest.We are looking for our leader we know you guys have him  captured" said the demon. "What are you talking about, you are the first demon we have" said the priest. "why dont you ask your friend there"said the demon. Just as the priest turned around the demons eyes went black and the room was engulfed with laughter then a guard fainted and then the demon went limp. "what just happened, why did he faint why is the demon limp"asked the man. "I dont think something good is going to come of this" said the priest. A solider ran into the room "Sire the demon who was helping us, he just died" said the solider. "How did it happen?" asked the man. "He was talking to the scientists and all of a sudden the lights went of and there was a knife sticking of of him, but sire that wasnt the werid part"said the solider. the man walked over to the solider. "what is werider than that"asked the man. "After the lights came back on there was a message on the wall, it said We want the goddess and our leader by night or we are going destory you village and we will kill or males and make the women and children slaves in our town
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« Reply #32 on: March 13, 2010, 07:51:43 PM »

Oh wow... demons? Mmmkaay. It was really good but I still am curious about you and your puddle of blood...  Grin
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« Reply #33 on: March 14, 2010, 05:22:00 PM »

Good Job :) The demons kinda remind me of Charmed. But no harm there :) I love charmed
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« Reply #34 on: March 16, 2010, 07:46:48 AM »

oh really? hmmm
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« Reply #35 on: April 21, 2010, 06:13:56 PM »

MORE MORE? or no more? Could this be the end of the story..?? i don't think so.. or i do think so?
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« Reply #36 on: April 23, 2010, 09:01:34 AM »

no sorry i am writing just been going through alot of choas lol i will have it up hopefully tonight
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« Reply #37 on: April 23, 2010, 02:51:49 PM »

 Grin
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« Reply #38 on: April 23, 2010, 06:47:22 PM »

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« Reply #39 on: May 05, 2010, 09:42:15 AM »

ummm hi i kinda forgot what everyone wanted there powers to be so tell me so i can get started lol
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« Reply #40 on: May 07, 2010, 01:47:24 AM »

lmfao i forgot >.<
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« Reply #41 on: May 08, 2010, 09:36:33 PM »

ok ummm wat abilty does everyone want to have
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« Reply #42 on: May 09, 2010, 02:00:02 AM »

I 'll message you.
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« Reply #43 on: May 11, 2010, 08:14:28 AM »

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